Monday, October 7, 2013

The Chicken Adventures of Golden...Now with Super Special Added Bonus Feature!

My eight year old son spent almost two hours writing and illustrating a story today. Yes, kids write stories every day, but I have reason to be particularly thrilled with this one. 

Eliot has pretty severe ADHD and until recently he hated reading and was none too fond of writing either. Organic, earth-mama that I am, I have spent the last two or three years trying to keep my son off the stimulant meds that all his doctors and therapists and teachers were telling me he needed. I wasn't going to be one of those moms who caved in and ran to the doctor for Ritalin the minute her kid acted up a little. But after he wound up in a psychiatrist hospital a couple weeks ago, it seemed high time to start caving.

He's been on a time-released stimulate med (that's code for "amphetamine") called Vyvanse for about two weeks and he is a child transformed. No longer lashing out at everyone including himself. Happier then I've seen him in many, many months. Liking school again. Willing and able to read and write. He's still not exactly a poster child for perfect behavior, but then, neither am I.

But I am now officially an idiot for trying to keep my son off the medicine which appears to be exactly what he needs to be a happy and functional human being. And I've never been more overjoyed to be an idiot in my many long years of doing idiotic things.

Here's my boy's story:

The Chicken Adventures of Golden 
Eliot's Stories

Chapter 1: 
There was a chicken named Golden. 
She was in a store with other chickens. She was bored.

 Then a boy named Eliot said, “I want one of those chickens,” he said.
 He got one of them

And he got Golden. He loved Golden. 
He named Golden, “Golden.” 
He gave her treats

 She loved Eliot. She played with Eliot. Golden had friends too. 
She ran to Eliot when he walked in the backyard.


Eliot carried Golden to the corner of the block
and took Golden to a pet show and tell. 
They were on the newspaper.
They were best friends. Golden laid the first egg. 
Chapter 2: 
 Golden got lost. Eliot was sad. Golden was on a...

adventure. Golden was captured. 
Somebody stole animals. His name is Animal Man. 
He was doing animal experiments on turning himself...

into animals and mixed up animals. 
When it was dark, Golden got a plan with the other animals. 
They made a plan. When it was morning time...

the animals started the plan. 
Golden honked. He [Animal Man] walked backwards. 
The monkey grabbed the keys and unlocked the cages.

Chapter 3: Golden eventually got home. 
Golden was happy. Eliot was too.

The end.

  Well. I was just finishing this up and was about to publish this blog entry at 9:30pm, when my boy called down the stairs and said he couldn't sleep. He's been in his bed and quiet since 8pm. He asked me to come up and see what he had written. There were five more pages in his book and he read them all to me. I'll just include the first two for now because they were absolutely amazing. This kid never talks about his feelings. But he wrote this:


The Adventures of school
Chapter 1
bad times
Eliot was bad. Really bad.
He was sent to the principal's office 4 times.
He was the baddest kid in the school.

[The picture shows Eliot being restrained by a teacher.]

Chapter 2
good times
Eliot eventually Eliot was the best kid.
He never went to the principal's office.
He was happy as can be.
He went full days in school.
The end.

[The picture shows Eliot sitting in his school beanbag chair, smiling and waving.]

Wow. And I thought it was going to be a story about chickens. Ain't no chickens here. 
Talk about happy endings. 
:)